A couple books I've flipped through said that part of a plain and sane personal statement is to talk about your goals in terms of what you intend to do you in your career. I don't know I would want to sub-specialize in at this point and I don't know whether I'd be primarily interested in academic or private practice. How important is it to include this kind of information in your personal statement?
I've seen quite a few of your posts here on orthogate and the best advice I can give you if you want to match is to chill out. The large majority of your posts, this one being a prime example, focus on the most trivial details that really don't matter much, if at all. Your energy would be best spent at just learning anatomy, working hard, staying late, being enthusiastic, and just acting like a normal person who is easy to get along with.
Why get a book to tell you how to write a personal statement then worry whether or not to include their potential career goals 40 years from now? Write something that actually is important to you and not something scripted from a how-to book.
For those of you wondering what to write about for a good PS, the best advice I can give is to write a story about yourself and why ortho would be a good fit for you. We dont want to read solely about your competetive grades, board scores, etc. like a modified CV, and we also dont want some random story that has no relationship to orthopedics. Tell us who you are in a way that captivates our attention and why you are interested and why you will be successful in this field. Remember, we will be flipping through hundreds of these, so you want to make yours memorable. Finally, have everyone you know proof read it for you and make corrections/suggestions...family, friends, classmates, mentors, anyone. The more people the better.
Oh, and one thing that has come up in years past is length - I would recommend 1 page, no longer.
*cough ** cough *.. ROL.. you haven't even started intern year yet, and you're referring to orthopaedics as "us" and "we" and blah blah..
You crack me up dude (or dudette)
Anyway, I agree with ROL. Iserson's and first aid suck, and don't really apply to ortho, at least, that's my humble opinion. It's too methodical (sp?) and application reviewers see right through it.
Hell, my story includes me getting hit by a car, being in the icu for a few weeks, missing a year of school, having 7 operations, scars all over..a half dozen broken bones,.. and i was looped in with "that's the typical ortho story".. really? it is.. I didn't think so, but nevertheless, that is HOW I got interested.
You have to write your statement as a who narrative of who you were, how you got here, and if you so dare.. some of your career aspirations. Yes, statistically, it is not the best to say you want to do SPORTS SPORTS SPORTS.. or whatever.. but I'm sure you have thought about either being a communopod or academiapod in a large town, city, or small burb, or way-out mid-west town.
Be honest.